Fighters and Wizards

Guest In · Posted: Thu, 04 Dec 2008 15:02 Post subject:

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Guest In · Posted: Thu, 04 Dec 2008 15:05 Post subject:

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4-ый пункт не заканчивается точкой ( '.' )

Guest In · Posted: Thu, 04 Dec 2008 15:10 Post subject:

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3-ий пункт не такое :

Точка после названия жирная

Сам текст начинается с маленькой буквы

Guest In · Posted: Thu, 04 Dec 2008 15:16 Post subject:

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Guest In · Posted: Thu, 04 Dec 2008 15:33 Post subject: Introduction

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You on site of the most progressive Online games "Fighters and Wizards".

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Guest In · Posted: Thu, 04 Dec 2008 15:41 Post subject: Bag

На скрине красным обозначено где дожна быть большая буква

А жёлтым: то ли должна быть большая буква то ли продолжение предыдушего предложения

Guest In · Posted: Thu, 04 Dec 2008 18:34 Post subject: Text

Rooms. Term of removal of room will expire through 1 day.
Throw room

should be:

Room rental will expire in 1 day
Abandon/leave the room

Creator In · Joined: 25 Nov 2008 Posts: 126 Location: Saint-Petersburg

Некоторые орфографические ошибки исправлены, спасибо.
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Yours faithfully, Oleg Belokopytov

Guest In · Posted: Thu, 04 Dec 2008 18:53 Post subject:

Weak elixir
Drunkenness: Weak
Action time: 2 hour(s)
Price: Copper: 20
Power elixir
Drunkenness: Power - Powerful если охота дословно переводить, я ббы предложил Strong
Action time: 4 hour(s)
Price: Copper: 50
Very power elixir
Drunkenness: Very power - Very strong
Action time: 6 hour(s)
Price: Silver: 1

Guest In · Posted: Thu, 04 Dec 2008 20:11 Post subject:

Guest In · Posted: Thu, 04 Dec 2008 20:15 Post subject:

Тоже можно.

Heals traumas to gravity: Light

gravity - это сила притяжения.
deadly- смертоносный но никак не смертельный.
Можно просто Heals traumas: Light, Serious, Critical, Leathal(а не deadly)

Your health makes 80% - makes? убрать надо бы и заменить на is

Here you can be healed from traumas and restore own health, having brought the modest donation.

Here you can heal traumas and restore your health, for a modest donation.

Guest In · Posted: Thu, 04 Dec 2008 21:41 Post subject:

Про хмель лучше

Strong

Powerfull

Smile

Creator In · Joined: 25 Nov 2008 Posts: 126 Location: Saint-Petersburg

Ошибки исправлены, спасибо.
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Yours faithfully, Oleg Belokopytov

Guest In · Posted: Fri, 05 Dec 2008 11:50 Post subject: Coordinates

Guest In · Posted: Fri, 05 Dec 2008 12:45 Post subject:

But on the map